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This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.
Gary Provost, quoted in Roy Peter Clark’s ‘Writing Tools’
This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become...
The full thing is somewhere on my blog, but…yeah. Good luck finding it. :P
Why, Tumblr? Why must you cut off the original post? That’s what I wanted to share. -_-
right here should be...every writer should learn. That is, if they want