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15th July 2011

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This sentence has five words.

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.

Gary Provost, quoted in Roy Peter Clark’s ‘Writing Tools’

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    This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become...
  3. the44th reblogged this from theforeshadow and added:
    The full thing is somewhere on my blog, but…yeah. Good luck finding it. :P
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  6. theforeshadow reblogged this from odettenoire and added:
    Why, Tumblr? Why must you cut off the original post? That’s what I wanted to share. -_-
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  8. inadvertentcleverness reblogged this from ieattedtheearth and added:
    right here should be...every writer should learn. That is, if they want
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